Gossamer - Comments

  • n. josten

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    This layout is so pretty and the summary is equally as gorgeous; it's one of those summaries that I could not say no to even if I tried. I am so excited to read more of this. The prologue was so poetic and beautifully written. This story is already a gem; I have such a great feeling about it. I really need you to update this and answer the questions the prologue left me with.

    Please and thank you.
    October 11th, 2013 at 01:58am
  • spencer hastings.

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    First of all, I love the layout. It's so pretty.

    This is so beautiful and poetically written. I am adoring it. You really have a lot of talent. And you leave the reader with a lot of questions after the prologue. I hope that you answer them!
    October 7th, 2013 at 05:37pm
  • raja sahara

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    omg this is so good
    October 7th, 2013 at 06:02am
  • vices

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    oh my gosh you just
    you caught me all around in this
    GOSSAMER GIRL NO STOP THIS RIGHT NOW EMOTIONS
    October 7th, 2013 at 05:59am
  • vices

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    is that aaroN JOHNSON
    DID YOU JUST QUOTE CONSTANT CONVERSATIONS
    I'M IN LOVE OK READING NOW BYE
    October 7th, 2013 at 05:58am
  • kahlo

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    jesus take the wheel
    i'm shaking
    i am shaken
    you have shaken me
    congratulations darling
    this is perfect and beautiful and short and UGH I LOVE IT COME HERE Arms
    congrats on ypur excellent writing skills ok bb
    October 7th, 2013 at 04:34am
  • rust cohle

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    this is absolutely gorgeous. i love this, a lot.
    October 7th, 2013 at 01:13am
  • nautical.

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    ahhh me gusta.

    tbh this looks like it's going to be amazing, even though there isn't much to it yet. your way of writing is very, like, haunting. it's the words you use that set the mood. and the line about falling in love with a gossamer girl — i'm swooming.
    October 7th, 2013 at 12:42am