I've Been Stuck on This Forever - Comments

  • samlovesmusic

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    I would enjoy a Seth one but which ever wolf you want if not Seth
    November 17th, 2013 at 07:41pm
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    which wolf though?
    November 17th, 2013 at 05:37pm
  • samlovesmusic

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    I think you should make a story with a different wolf
    November 15th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • samlovesmusic

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    I think you should make a story with a different wolf
    November 15th, 2013 at 10:30pm
  • trumpetgrl235

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    Please make a sequel please!!!!
    November 1st, 2013 at 07:38pm
  • ashleyliz_x

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    loved it!!! such a good story :)
    November 1st, 2013 at 05:06pm
  • ashleyliz_x

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    i love it! Bella is such a bitch! But Ally should let Jake help her since Rose and Emmett can't. Ahhh! She told him she loves him!!! that was so cute!!! cannot wait for more!
    October 27th, 2013 at 09:03pm
  • ashleyliz_x

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    awww that was incredibly cute !!!! Jake is a sweetheart! And I love Alice's character! she's awesome! cannot wait for more !!!
    October 25th, 2013 at 07:31pm
  • Nightmaire

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    Great update please keep updating. This is turning out to be amazing.
    October 24th, 2013 at 03:15pm
  • ashleyliz_x

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    ahhhh in love with this story!!!! great update
    October 18th, 2013 at 09:38pm
  • Nightmaire

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    This is a great story. You will find a way to get some more action into the story. My suggestion would be to think of and write all of the possible problems that could happen in the story, find which ones you want to be minor conflicts and which ones you want to be major conflicts, jot down how each one will play out, and finally put which ones you think are best to go with the story (both minor and major conflicts go into the story). Please update soon.
    October 12th, 2013 at 01:47am