i love it! Bella is such a bitch! But Ally should let Jake help her since Rose and Emmett can't. Ahhh! She told him she loves him!!! that was so cute!!! cannot wait for more!
This is a great story. You will find a way to get some more action into the story. My suggestion would be to think of and write all of the possible problems that could happen in the story, find which ones you want to be minor conflicts and which ones you want to be major conflicts, jot down how each one will play out, and finally put which ones you think are best to go with the story (both minor and major conflicts go into the story). Please update soon.
October 12th, 2013 at 01:47am
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