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  • kellicoverboard

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    @ Kellicxo
    I love you too! I'm glad I didn't hurt your feelings. I was genuinely afraid to read your reply hahaha
    January 1st, 2014 at 05:36am
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    @ rebel_gloria @ A-DiDDy101
    Don't worry I'm not offended at all! I just didn't know whether you guys wanted a long story or not! I should've asked you guys that before but since you guys don't mind I'll let everything out starting chapter 14! honestly thank you for this because now I have more to write instead of getting stuck on stuff. I love you guys!
    January 1st, 2014 at 04:49am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    I wouldn't be to opposed to this story being kind of short 'cause it's so amazing. You should definitely do a chapter in Vic's POV. I hope Vic can guess it so he can finally start helping Kellin. I also agree with rebel_gloria. You keep giving us these clues and lead up to the climax that just never happens. Having only 20 chapters isn't really a short story though. Anyway, I'm really excited to see what happens next.
    January 1st, 2014 at 04:18am
  • kellicoverboard

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    Now, this is just a suggestion but I think some secrets need to be revealed pretty soon because it feels like the story is dragging on. I love you a lot and I don't want to offend you or anything because your writing has improved greatly! It just feels like the chapters are drama filled and it leads up to the big reveal then it never happens. But that's just my opinion. I can't wait for the next chapter and yes yes yes I want it in Vic's POV like the whole entire chapter. I think it would be a good change up. I think Vic actually knows what happened but I don't know how and Kellin's dream confused me so much. Does he know Justin from the past like I don't know. Update soon!
    January 1st, 2014 at 04:15am
  • Kellicxo

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    You'll seeeeee! Hahaha
    December 26th, 2013 at 07:46am
  • kellicoverboard

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    I am so confused! Please update soon or else lol no but I can't wait to see what happens omg
    December 26th, 2013 at 06:44am
  • Kellicxo

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    @ rebel_gloria
    It's all part of my plan .-. And hmmm did he? haha no
    December 26th, 2013 at 03:42am
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    WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK WHAT THE FUCK. WHAT THE FUCK JUSTIN. WHAT THE FUCK VIC. NO POOR KELLIN. WHAT THE FUCK DUDE.
    Did Vic seriously cheat one Kellin?????
    December 26th, 2013 at 03:31am
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    @ IAmNotHuman
    XD muahhahaha
    December 25th, 2013 at 08:04am
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    @ Kellicxo
    QUIT MESSING WITH MY MIND! xD
    December 25th, 2013 at 08:01am
  • Kellicxo

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    @ IAmNotHuman

    Justin knew he would be vulnerable thats why he did it at that moment...I was going to have ot happen later in the story but you guys wanted to know things so quickly so i fast forwarded things
    Justin is a lil raping creep. Hes evil.. and did Vic really cheat? Or was Justin just saying that?
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:43am
  • IAmNotHuman

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    WTF JUSTIN REJFNGBKSRTHVCX WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT WHAT. IDK LIKE WHAT HIM AND VIC WHAT?!?! THEN HE RAPES HIM!?!? AND THEY WERE JUST PLAYING VIDEO GAMES AND HE RAPES HIM!?!? WHAT!?!?! CMON NOW JUSTIN WTF!?!?!?! AND VIC CHEATED!?!?!? WHAT!?!?!? HE HAS A FREAKINNGGG FLASHBACK OF HOW THEY MEET AND THEN GETS RAPED BY JUSTIN AFTERWARDS WTF !!?!";1'/1??"!"1'1 I CANT BELIEVE THIS!!! I KNEW JUSTIN WAS ALL CREEPY BUT I DIDNT THINK HE'D RAPE HIM JUST LIKE THAT!!! DANNNGG MAN.
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • Kellicxo

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    @ Punkprincess778
    Owiieee :[ I'm sorrrry! Things will get worse before they get better
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:40am
  • Kellicxo

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    @ swskellicptv
    Im sorrry! I tried to upload it before but..I couldnt I was stuck on writing the bad parts.IT HAD TO BE DONE
    YOU WILL LOVE ME.SOON
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:39am
  • Punkprincess778

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    No that's not allowed.what u just did no no bad. *slaps your wrist*
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:24am
  • swskellicptv

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    I'M FUCKING CRYING ON CHRISTIMAS EVE, I HATE YOU.
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:20am
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    @ xkellicx
    Thank you!!! And Yesss express your feels
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:15am
  • xkellicx

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    UGGGGHHHH I FUCKING LOVE THIS STORY AND IM PISSED OFF RN THIS IS SOME SAD SHIT
    December 25th, 2013 at 07:13am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    He secrets are killig me! I want to know why so had but you beautiful person just keep teasing us and making us want more. I'm going to die I I don't get more!!!
    December 18th, 2013 at 02:53am
  • Kellicxo

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    @ rebel_gloria
    Muahahahaaha you'll have to wait and see c:
    December 16th, 2013 at 12:41am