First off, I adore the layout, but I think the color of the font is hard to see at times where the picture gets a bit darker.
Other than that little bit, I really like the story so far. I love reading about the sea and mystical creatures from it, so I'm definitely going to be keeping tabs on it. I find the way you paint imagery and use metaphors really lovely. It's great so far!
Other than that little bit, I really like the story so far. I love reading about the sea and mystical creatures from it, so I'm definitely going to be keeping tabs on it. I find the way you paint imagery and use metaphors really lovely. It's great so far!