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I was expecting like a party but nope they played freakin D&D,I guess that's cool too. Awesome can't wait for more

Hahaha Frankie seemed so awkward >.< in an adorable way, of course

Soooo good update soon :)

@ HarleyHomicide
YAY YAY that's what I want!! Please, let me know if I leave a gap or something for coming chapters!

What is in store for Frankie. I cant wait to read more

I am absolutely in love with this story! Your writing style is amazing and the pace your story is going is alot more realistic than most Frerard stories. I also love how you end each chapter - it's not a cliffhanger but it does leave me wonder what will happen next and makes me want to read more. I can't wait for the next update and I can't wait to see where this story goes. :)

Oh my goodness, poor Frankie.. and Gerard.. No, that is not how you're gonna get the boy into bed with you (that idea probably hasn't even crossed his mind yet but hey, it shouldXD). Still loving this and can't wait for the next update. Soon please!

Frank touched some alcohol what? I laughed at the end when he flipped Gerard . Awesome story

Ohh and just read the update.. This is so not good.. There's about to be a rager, yes?? Uh oh Frankie

@ faux.
Oh god you definitely don't have to do that, I write.. Extravagantly lolXD thx though, I guess the idea of someone reading my shit still kinda frks me out

argh i really like this omfg cant wait for the next chapter

@ ShotToRemember
LOL I'M SORRY! I guess it was the forever pent-up rage building inside of me. I can't say for sure or not whether I've read yours because your username does ring a bell, but...heh. Y'know. Maybe I've cooled down enough to edit it, yeah. And thank you for your analyzation! The gears are slowly turning for me; hopefully I'll have a regular flow of storyline! (And I'm gonna read your stories, you do realize :P)

Okay, I feel kinda a long comment coming on;)

First of all, I'd like to say that your summary, while very informative of your state of mind, really put me off and set a kinda pissy tone for your story. I couldn't help but feel like I was being demeaned as I read, honestly. It's not that what you said isn't true, it's just that, as a Frerard writer myself (and a worrier), I had to wonder if you have read my stories and thought that way of them, or if my stories have any of that far-fetchedness in them (although, in themselves my stories are really far-fetched, because those are the plotlines I enjoy, so hmm..), or anything to that effect. Just a heads-up. If you don't wanna change it that's perfectly fine with me, but I'm just letting you know that it DID effect the way I went into your story. ..In that I went into your story like a bitch.

But your story (note the new paragraph, I'm gonna forget about your summary now, haha)!! It's fantastic, really. You have a great hand at your writing style, as it's very well-controlled. Your flow is amazing and I'm super excited to read what I can imagine will be a nice, slow-paced relationship build-up (as opposed to the ones where they instantly fall in love and jump into bed and... what? seriously? lol). Also, the way you make Gerard's presence very known, but not make it seem like he's all Frank is thinking about (because really? Even if you like someone they're not on your mind all of the time) in the first chapter is brilliant--professional, even. And I love Frank and Mikey's relationship; it's how I imagine two teenage guys interacting, really.

Ohohoh the part (in I think chapter three? maybe two) where Frank is asking about Mikey as a senior and gets confused about high school having smoke breaks was effing aDORable. There's great voice in that (in the whole thing, really). Gerard's fantastic, too, with not being overly chatty with Frank, but telling him he likes his piercings and whatnotXD

Anyways, I don't know if any of that made sense, but I just thought I'd tell you that I really do love this so far, and all of my bitchiness upon entry has pretty much dissipated, because with your talent you have the right to be bitchy about other people's writing;) Please update soon 'cause I'm super psyched to see where this goes!

this is so cute :)

Love it

@ Mcrmyhelpme
yay thanks!

I like this please give me more

Wow I love this so far and it's only the first chapter? Also to make italics you put the words in between these: [ i ] [ / i ] without the spaces. (the last one has a slash in it to tell mibba you've finished with italics). Hope I helped