The Town - Comments

@ DarkKnightAddict
Yay, thank you so much!

Comment swap:
Well it doesn't seem like your first smut at all - seriously! I really like how in depth into Aria's mind you go. I hope there is some more present time Mike and Aria contact. We barely heard about Victor and I already dislike him because I already ship Mike and Aria. Haha keep writing!

@ ppoltergeist
thank you for your feedback! And yes, I love The Weeknd!

@ Ailurophile
Lol, no problem, I know how that is. :)

this was really good for the first time,
I love the Weeknd so the summary page immediately caught my attention haha

@ little cthulhu
woops, that sentence wasn't meant to be like that. >.< lol thanks for pointing it out!

For your first smut, I have to say that isn't that bad at all. I like that you had a pretty slow and smooth flow about it. Wasn't all rushing about, though that may have just been the way I read it. I think you've done a fantastic job with this.

His mouth kept leaving a traced my skin with his kisses all around my jaw, until finally coming in contact with mine.
This sentence is pretty bumpy, I think it would be better either:
His mouth traced my skin with his kissed all around my jaw, until finally it came in contact with mine.
or
His mouth kept leaving to trace my skin with his kisses all around my jaw, until finally coming in contact with mine.

Random, I adore the name Aria.