Endless Pools - Comments

I really love this story as well. I can tell fom the first chapter that things are going to start to get interesting. I love Ginamarie's lack of enthusiasm for going to this outdoors camp and how she pretty much sees the lake as some bacteria infested lake and in her mind who would want to go for a swim in that. I find her to be comical and I see a bit of myself in her; mainly because as a young girl I was forced to go on family vacations and parties.

Thank you! I'm so glad you like it so far, I'm working on the second chapter now but I've been super busy so hopefully it will come out next week :)

I really love this so far. It reminds me kind of myself because I'm not a huge fan of the outdoors, but Ginamarie seems to hate them just a little bit more. Lol. I love her name by the way (even if she doesn't)! I can't wait to see what unfolds at this camp! I'm not really trusting the enthusiasm of "Ginger" right now, but we'll see.

The only thing I suggest for editing would be spell check for certain words. Can't wait to see what you have in store for us.