Coming Under Fire - Comments

I'm glad they worked it out and i'm glad John is okay :) this was such a fun series :) i'm kinda sad to see it end but you did a good job.

and you left me with another cliff hanger!!!! i hate that! and that doesn't sound good. John better not die. i swear! i liked this chapter. Izzy always reminds me of Stephanie Plum, getting herself into dangerous situations when she's being told over and over to stay out of it. haha.

I'm also insanely sorry it took me this long to read this! i totally forgot you'd updated and i was working on Poison when it hit me that i was a bad friend and came to read this.

I hate cliff hangers. :P it wasn't lame, it was cute. and of course new information(as slight as it was) is always good. I like the relationship with Izzy and John. It's always been a favorite of mine, since you started these stories. I want to kno who is calling her. and i want to know what they are keeping from her. i hate not knowing. lol. i hate it!! more soon?

"Hell No, I'm too old for that shit" best line ever. it reminded me of when Ranger said something about how he only does the spiderman shit in good weather or something. lol. this was a good chapter. i liked it. i was waiting for somebody to shoot somebody. and the pregnancy comment was of course wonderful. :D i loved it. you need to stop neglecting this story. ily!

it wasn't boring. it was just the kind of chapter i needed to read today considering i haven't had any fucking sleep. fast paced enough to keep my attention but simple enough so i didn't have to think about it. I hope Izzy and John can work it all out in the end. And i find it amusing that Dom just gets out of jail and goes to get his big pile of illegally obtained money and a gun. that works haha. Not a bad chapter at all. :) more soon?

I really enjoyed this chapter. Really loved how it was totally real and on point with the stress on their relationship. I feel so bad for Izzy shes going thru so much and they all just put more and more on her. Good job babe. Loved it

This was a good chapter. i really kind of want to know whats going on now though and why. like i'm frustrated lol. but it was good and i'm kind of thinking John is a jerk a little bit with this one. lol. good job babe, more soon? I'm soooooo sorry it took me so long to get to it, im a terrible friend.

@ Intellect of Ike
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your insight. If you have time, let me know what you think about the rest of the story. This series has really been my baby for the past year.

Let me start by saying that I've only had time to read through the first two chapters. From what I can tell, I really enjoy your writing style. I love the realistic conversations and tensions between the characters, and how you can really drag people into the story. I also like the little snippets of sarcasm you throw in. Looking forwards to reading more! 8.5/10, definitely would recommend.
Best regards, Ike.

This was a really good chapter. I got a kick out of her fake name. Gina scamboli lol kinda awesome haha. It's prolly only gonna get her into trouble but it was fun just the same. I wouldn't want her to do anything but help John. After all she's dragged him into some shit. This was a fun chapter made me happy to read it. I love you :)

This was probably my favorite chapter you've written for this so far. It had all the emotions and the sex and all that. i'm so glad that she told dom to fuck himself. i can't believe he's being such a piece of shit when it was all his fucking fault anyways. I loved this one babe. can't wait for more. :)

I have a feeling things r abt to get complicated. izzy needs to keep out of the trouble i kno she's abt to get into haha. this one was good. informative to a degree anyway. i loved it.

this one was kind of intense lol. Like when she was going to John's house. John didnt give her a lot of info there. I want to kno what the fuck now dude. it's kind of pissing me off if i'm being totally honest. lol. Good job as usual. And who the hell is that scary guy who was in her apartment? there always has to be scary people lol. Loved it. Update soon!

I liked this one. It was a bit of a filler, but i'm glad she got to talk to Dom and get that figured out at least a little bit. I'm curious as to why the ex-girlfriend and the daughter left town. Creepy. Anyways, it was a good chapter, and I can't wait to get into the real meat of the whole thing. Izzy always gets herself into some pretty fucked up situations. haha. Good job baby.

In other news. I'm so so so so so sooooooooooooooooooo sorry i am just reading it now. I was so busy all weekend but i feel like a terrible friend keeping you waiting so long. I'm so so sorry. I hope you can find it in your heart to forgive me for being terrible. ily.

Jesus why didn't he tell her wtf. like hasn't she proven herself trust worthy enough times before? I liked this chapter. it was a little quick but it was good. who doesn't love drama. especially when you've created such an amazing character as Izzy. love it it poptart. :) more soon.

I love this.

Yay!! I'm so happy you brought this back!!! Good little intro. can't wait for it to get juicy!!! I love it.