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  • Honeybell

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    @Erin.Grace.: Wow, thank you so much for your comment! It's great to hear that you're enjoying the story. I lose a lot of readers because I'm not writing in the whole mainstream fanfic/high school genre, so it's really encouraging to know that there are Mibbians out there looking for something different. All your questions tell me I'm doing my job writing well! Don’t worry, they'll be answered in time… some even very soon. (; I hope you continue to read and enjoy! Thank you again for your comment!
    October 18th, 2013 at 07:20pm
  • Erin.Grace.

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    Ah I love it, and wow how you described her foster home? amazing! I love your use of 3rd person too, It's refreshing to read a 3rd person story that is so incredibly well written and not some high school romance story either. Is there a name for what they are? half demon half human? and what did he mean by mate??? Does he know what he is? does her mechanics teacher know what she is? I mean he said he fought with him before he retired, and it sounds like Gabriel fought the demons before. Does Gabriel know what Rosario is? ahhhh c:
    October 17th, 2013 at 12:52pm
  • ash.dugas

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    Your description of life at her foster home gave me chills, in a good and bad way. I can't wait to see where the story goes from here. Keep it up!
    October 15th, 2013 at 03:46am
  • Honeybell

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    Thank you both! I hope you continue to read and enjoy! (:
    October 14th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • ash.dugas

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    Wow! Your prologue is quick captivating. I will definitely keep read.
    October 14th, 2013 at 07:11am
  • A S K I N G .

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    stuff just got real! :D
    October 14th, 2013 at 06:56am