December 7th, 2014 at 08:50pm
Make Me Alive - Comments
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Love it.March 24th, 2014 at 02:22pm
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i love this!! :) i havent read a glee fic before and i can't really think why... but this is great so far, can't wait to read more!October 19th, 2013 at 12:05pm
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This was a cute little story! The layout is simple but cute, and your writing is all well spaced so it isn't too hard on the eyes. The mishap at the beginning with asking who died, poor, guy :/ I was so sad to hear about his passing :(October 16th, 2013 at 10:36pm
I love the changed perspectives. It keeps the story fresh.
I really like the way you write, you're very descriptive and I feel like I can imagine it perfectly in my mind. You're a very good writer. For not watching Glee and not knowing anything about the characters/actors, I feel like I know Chris kind of well now, haha:)!
Also, the layout is great! Simple and effective and easy to read. The picture of Chris that you used fits it very well, too.
The one thing I do want to mention is maybe some break up in between the conversations; some thoughts, or something, maybe. But that's just me!
Honestly, I don't have much criticism other than that because I thought you did a very nice job. I really liked your MC that you've created because he seems like a super nice and chill guy. I kind of want to be friends with him, too.
I can't wait to see where your story goes because it seems like it is going to be very interesting and unique. Good job! I can't wait to read more, you've made a fan out of me!