Homepage › Stories › Dear Santa. › Comments

Dear Santa. - Comments

  • smurfy1999

    smurfy1999 (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Yay an update! Love Harry and Olive!
    July 24th, 2014 at 05:51pm
  • drama-queen-ak

    drama-queen-ak (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    I'm curious how this is all going to pan out. And like how the girls will explain etc.
    update soon please! Smile
    May 17th, 2014 at 07:12am
  • drama-queen-ak

    drama-queen-ak (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    Canada
    I'm curious how this is all going to pan out. And like how the girls will explain etc.
    update soon please! Smile
    May 17th, 2014 at 07:12am
  • Dezi Demize

    Dezi Demize (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Liam is so adorable...just saying! Lol Things are getting interesting, can't wait to read what happens next! ♥♥♥
    April 23rd, 2014 at 08:44pm
  • diana parr

    diana parr (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    Oh gosh it took me awhile to finally catch up, but Harry is the cutest thing ever! In Love I hope Louis isn't too mean with Olive!

    Also I love how Stella is kinda confident like that hahaha.
    April 6th, 2014 at 07:32am
  • Dezi Demize

    Dezi Demize (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    What the hell crawled up Louis' ass and died?! Hope I find out in the next chapter! So excited ♥♥♥♥
    April 1st, 2014 at 12:47am
  • diana parr

    diana parr (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    27
    Location:
    United States
    First off, the banner. In Love

    Second, aww, awkward Liam is the cutest Liam! And Harry is just a peach, demanding for morning kisses and all!

    Can I make one little suggestion, tho? I think the story will be much more comfortable to read if you add the punctuations in the dialogues. You know like here: '...as Harry asked me to come along” I said...' Just a little comma right there and it'd be perfect!Cute
    March 11th, 2014 at 11:38am
  • Dezi Demize

    Dezi Demize (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    This story is fantastic! I meant to comment on it sooner, but I don't get on here as much. I can't wait to see what happens next! ♥♥♥
    March 11th, 2014 at 08:12am
  • ashtynemily

    ashtynemily (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    31
    Location:
    United Kingdom
    Loved this story anyway, but the fact I live in the village next to Finchingfield made me love it even more! Haha, keep up the good work girlies!xo
    December 11th, 2013 at 10:23pm
  • iWearConverse

    iWearConverse (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    28
    Location:
    United States
    I love this so much I'm so glad you updated
    November 26th, 2013 at 06:23pm
  • KirstenChappell

    KirstenChappell (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    34
    Location:
    United States
    Love it so far! Please update!
    October 23rd, 2013 at 12:05pm
  • Bubblegum Pops

    Bubblegum Pops (100)

    :
    Member
    Gender:
    ♀
    Age:
    30
    Location:
    United States
    Hey. This is really good story. I love this! This is fantastic! UPDATE.
    October 19th, 2013 at 01:28am
Homepage › Stories › Dear Santa. › Comments