Uppercut - Comments

love it

I love it already - I love the fast pace and the descriptions and pretty much all of it. It's fantastic to read.

@ Louise Belcher I'm glad! Thank you. I was trying to experiment with a writing style I've found myself drifting towards a lot as of late. I feel like it'll be difficult for me to maintain this style without it becoming monotonous, but we'll see where it goes!

@ What... Your comment actually made me die slightly out of joy. Still deciding on the rating (either PG-13 -- R). Thanks again for all of your encouragement!

@ Fandango Oh my goodness asdfghjkl; thank you. That's so wonderful to hear :)

Oh. God, intense already. I love your style. Can't wait for more :)

Woooooooow

I love it I just it it weren't NC-17 I would review it but it's already perfect just the way it is and I can't really explain it as eloquently as I would like but I just want you to know that I think what you're doing is great

Looove the concept of this. The way it's written in quick bursts is a risky move as you're not really focusing on the words but just goinggoinggoing and I don't know if that was intentional but daaaaayummm it worked.