Sweater Weather (or Whatever) - Comments

  • nightsfiction

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    This isn't a dull update at all, don't say that! I actually really, really loved it. It's nice to find out what happened with Brendon (or didn't). I hope he and Ryan work it out! Will talking to Gabe in class and pretending not to in this chapter is adorable and then of course, him giving Will the sweater is like perfect. I love your description of the sweater too! It makes me a little sad that Gabe doesn't want to name what they're doing and that Will doesn't press the issue, but I understand where Will is coming from there. I'm so happy you updated and I can't wait to read the next one! Keep up the great work. <3.
    October 24th, 2013 at 09:34am
  • nightsfiction

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    I love this story so much!!!!! I just read all 3 chapters. Your William is adorable and Ryan makes me laugh a lot. (I felt so badly for Ryan about Brendon and kind of want to hit Brendon!) Gabe is perfect! I love how you had him kind of feel William out by saying he just wanted to be friends and then had him call him on it and tell William to look him in the eyes and tell him it was nothing. My favorite part was when William said "I liked it." I laughed so hard! This story is the perfect combination of awkward and adorable. I can't wait to see what you write next!
    October 18th, 2013 at 07:59am