AG8210V - Comments

I like how Angie knows she's being super forward with her constant preguntas and is wary of how he'll respond, but each time, Troy replies like super calm and patient. He seems pretty cool-headed haha. I always love Troy/Angie dialogue, so frickin cute and awkward. Update again soon!

I love these frequent updates, keep em coming!!! :)

Omg I have such secondhand embarrassment for both of them, they're so painfully awkward around each other lol but it's cute. I really liked this chapter. Update whenever you can! Happy holidays :)

This story honestly confuses me so much but I love it. I'm only on chapter 9 and I'm gonna be so sad when I reach the latest update haha.

I love this!

I've always loved your writing and every time I get a chance to read a new chapter from this story I'm always amazed at how well and grown up your works are becoming. I can't wait to read the next update, this is well written and I'm curious about as much as Angie is :)

I can't wait to see where this all goes :)

Troy already has my heart.
The concept of this story is amazing, and I'm really excited to see where it goes. I really like reading from both Angie's and Troy's POVs, and your layout is gorgeous as always. Can't wait for more!!

This is really good and the concept behind it is interesting, I also like that you've explained the meaning behind AG8210V... it has a deep connection to his family and who he is, which I like. Your introduction to Troy was on point and the background you gave us about him was a great way to start this I think. Good job!

It's so funny that you put this one down for the giveaway because I literally came across it last night and instantly hit the recommend and subscribe button. I was so excited to see a story like this because this is my good shit right here. I can't get enough of sci-fi stories and this one looks so good! I love your explanation for AG8210V; I like how there's actual meaning behind it instead of it just being like a random or serial number or something lmao. Just as a bonus the layout is beautiful. I'm definitely going to make it a point to keep up with this story.

AHhh this story :)
I love everything about it and need to know more :)

Straight of the bat, that is a gorgeous layout. It's clean and simple so doesn't distract from the story but is still super pretty.

I love how you explain why he is AG8210V and it's interesting to develop a back story and timeline to your character. I don't think it was confusing like you seemed worried about in the notes. It was a good introduction to a back story and it will be interesting to see how it changes Troy as an individual in the future.

I'm liking this a lot now. It's a sci-fi and I haven't read one of those in a very long time. The writing is really well done and I see no grammatical or spelling errors at all. I love how your characters actually talk like adults. There's a natural professionalism to their language and you write the characters actions well. It's as if you study how people move in response to saying this lines and being in their situations. I feel as if you are watching this happening and writing it down since you have captured how real people would behave perfectly. Like I mean it, it's seriously perfect.

I think it's a very unique, creative, beautifully done story. You've fulfilled your idea well and you are a truly skilled writer :)

Straight of the bat, that is a gorgeous layout. It's clean and simple so doesn't distract from the story but is still super pretty.

I love how you explain why he is AG8210V and it's interesting to develop a back story and timeline to your character. I don't think it was confusing like you seemed worried about in the notes. It was a good introduction to a back story and it will be interesting to see how it changes Troy as an individual in the future.

I'm liking this a lot now. It's a sci-fi and I haven't read one of those in a very long time. The writing is really well done and I see no grammatical or spelling errors at all. I love how your characters actually talk like adults. There's a natural professionalism to their language and you write the characters actions well. It's as if you study how people move in response to saying this lines and being in their situations. I feel as if you are watching this happening and writing it down since you have captured how real people would behave perfectly. Like I mean it, it's seriously perfect.

I think it's a very unique, creative, beautifully done story. You've fulfilled your idea well and you are a truly skilled writer :)

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First off I am really sorry for not commenting in awhile, I'm super excited about this story. I love how your writing has improved (though it was great from the start) I can imagine how hard it is to be an officers daughter and having them show up with their car. I can imagine that being hard to make friends with your father is part of the law can be really intimidating.

OUUUUU Troy :D hahha him and Jackie seem to be great friends, I'm excited to see more of him soon :)

(also lmfao I saw pelican park.'s comment down there and thought it was me )

(also lmfao I saw pelican park.'s comment down there and thought it was me )

THIS LOOKS SO GOOD
I AM SO EXCITED

You know I'm seriously waiting for this to show up with a first chapter! Damn you for great plots and stories! D:

THIS ISN'T FAIR. WHY ARE YOU MAKING SUCH AMAZING STORIES WITH AMAZING PLOTS.
UGH, YOU SHOULD POST THE FIRST CHAPTER LIKE NOW BECAUSE THAT SUMMARY.

OH MY YHIS LOOKS SO GOOD I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE FIRST CHAPTER