THIS IS SO SAD and your writing and descriptions are beautiful. i teared up at the end and ugh now i just feel so broken. i don't know what to do with myself for the next few hours.
you have absolutely gorgeous writing that can touch many people.
i accidentally submitted my comment twice but here lemme edit this so i can emphasize how beautiful this story is. it's so heartbreaking and sad and i look forward to your future works.
Nooo, not weird at all. I really like Allister, too! He's so unique. I really like how he's not really blown away with her. That's always a fresh way to go about things. Adore it.
Absolutely beautiful. Your prose is fantastic and so smooth. I didn't want to stop reading. Completely disappointed there's only two chapters. I can't wait for more and to see where this is going.
you have absolutely gorgeous writing that can touch many people.