Tangled in the Great Escape - Comments, page 3

t0nyturtle_ (100)

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PLEASE UPDATE THIS :((

January 10th, 2014 at 04:55am

Jazzygiirr (100)

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please update <3

December 20th, 2013 at 09:32am

MayteAriannaa (100)

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Ahh update pleasee <3

December 17th, 2013 at 04:09am

t0nyturtle_ (100)

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PLEASE UPDATE :---(

December 14th, 2013 at 08:38pm

fleshingly (100)

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updATE NOW PLS

December 14th, 2013 at 03:19am

Stacey4everundead (100)

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Oh my god! This is freaking amazing. ❤️

December 11th, 2013 at 03:07am

AZNGRL (100)

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interesting story

December 10th, 2013 at 06:49pm

carolbbusin (100)

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Thank God Lauren said no ._.

December 9th, 2013 at 09:49pm

Cecil b (100)

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@ Artcoholic
Any time you want to talk , I'm here.

December 8th, 2013 at 12:51pm

elisegeree (100)

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I knew that something was going to happen with Lauren. He better not get involved with her!

December 8th, 2013 at 11:56am

Artcoholic (100)

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@ Cecil b
Thank you so much for your input, I really appreciate the feedback and will try my best to make it faster. If you don't mind, could I maybe message you for a bit of pointers or some ideas? :)

December 8th, 2013 at 11:55am

Cecil b (100)

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I have read the prequel as well as this story. My only thought is it needs to move along a bit faster. Where's the " hook" the " drama" that makes you want more? There has been nothing substantial happening in the plot that makes you want to read it simply because you just can't wait to see what happens next. I like the story,it is well written, but, please step it up! You are more than capable.

PS. Let Tony finally grow a pair & keep them.

December 8th, 2013 at 11:24am

vickyptv (100)

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I have literally spent a good 6 - 8 hours reading the prequel and this. This may just be the mosy perfectly written things I have read. The detail is fantastic. The story line, the characters, everything is spot on. I've laughed so much during this, especially the Jaime/Tony fight. That made me laugh so much. However I think Tony needs a reality check and he needs to know exactly how Cassie feels before he gets her back.

Overall this is a fantastic read and I will continue reading as well. Amazing job! :-)

December 8th, 2013 at 02:23am