Wake up Call - Comments

I don't often comment but this story deserves one. Leilani is such an interesting character that you have created. She is funny and has a wide range of interests. I thank god that she wasnt another female who is so dependant on Adam. I would really love to see where you go with this. As so far its amazing. I'll definitely be waiting and hoping that you continue this story. To see Adam and Leilani journey :)

love this

Love, love, love

@ likeanamerican
Awww, thank you so very much! I'm glad you like it so far. I'm working on the next chapter, but my muses are being uncooperative.

This is really good so far. Definitely one of the better written Adam fics on this site. :)

@ MCR-fabulouskilljoys
Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm so very glad you are liking it! I've been reading as many as I can so that I don't go and tell the same story as other people! My head is bursting with ideas, so hopefully I can get another chapter up today!

Really good! This plot is different from others and I will look forward to reading more

@ xoxo_girl
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you're liking it! I have been in a total writing slump lately and I'm hoping this story can knock me right out of it, but this is all that I had pop into my head. I'm now just waiting for Adam and Leilani to tell me what comes next!

your a talented writer! please update! i love this story already :)