Let's Be Alone Together - Comments

oh, Patrick! so amazing and adorable!

yay they're moving in together!

You and smut young lady, you're so good at writing Patrick like that it's unreal!

Hhhnnngg. Goddamn you I should not have read thay chapter at work! I totally thought that there would be some huge confrontation with the three but thay was so mellow! They're getting so serious!

I don't know whether or not I commented on this yet? But this chapter made me swoon. Ava's family are too cute! Reminds me a lot of my own family.

Also Patrick talking all dominant during their intimate moment was awesome. I feel like he needed the clarification and all that jazz. And a promise ring!!!!

Excuse me whilst I fan myself. ;)

Loved how you had Patrick talking about Ava being all his. I could totally see him being that way behind closed doors.

AAAAAAAAH <3<3 'Trick and Ava are legit the sweetest! Please don't ever stop writing - you're amazing! <3

I knew it. I KNEW IT! I was like, "Small box... wait a minute..." and then it clicked!! Holy shit, I wasn't expecting that, but what a lovely surprise! I can't wait to see what else is in store for these two! Great chapter and can't wait for the next!

Aww that was so very sweet! Hopefully nothing gets ugly

@ chynnablueink
Soon, mon coeur! I love Patrick too, he makes me feel fuzzy :D

@ lady_enygma
Yeah, I thought I'd leave a little ray of sunshine in there compared to all the other shitty people.

@ mswrite85
Yeah, I thought the true friend would be a good idea! Maybe we'll see her again. I'm really excited for the next chapter, I dropped a couple hints as to what will happen within this past one, but no one has noticed!

@ star collision.
I know, I always like writing those stupid, sappy moments between them because they make me all giddy!! They're my favorite couple omg I can't

@ birds ate my face
Aw, Aly and Ali, I love it! I work with someone named Alyssa, so it was the first name that popped into my head!

@ OvercastKidd
Thanks! I adore you!

I love love love how you write Patrick. More please.

We'll at least she had one real friend there.

UPDATED! Yay!!!! I do like how the interaction between her 'fake' friends came about. I like how you showed the other side of people's intentions. I dig that you introduced a true friend of hers from college, that was nice to see and I liked how Patrick was including her. I'm excited to see where you take this and I can't wait for the next installment.

Also, THANK YOU for adding a rec link on your story. You're truly aces and a complete angel. :) You're a doll, Ali Cat. :)

Psh, some friends she's got there. I hope we see more of Alyssa, I like her. The lovey moments between her and Patrick make my heart swell.

Olivia sucks, and Alyssa is sweet! I have a bestie names Alyssa, I call her Aly so we're both Ali and Aly lol anyway, I likes this, but her "friends" suck

I ADORE this

YAY YOU UPDATED

I love Patrick and Ava. I'm always waiting for Patrick to switch on his more dominant side with her, it's a total rush When she was comparing him to Pete when she was drunk, you described it perfectly--I could totally imagine his reaction: happy she thought that Pete couldn't compare, but at the same time, not wanting to think about her and Pete being together. I'm wondering how bad things are going to get with the fans...those chicks can be crazy

WHOOP I hope there's some smut coming up!

I get so excited when I see this story has been updated! It's 2:48am and I'm wide awake now. I knew the picture taking thing would come into play, I knew it! Drunk Ava is so precious - that bit had me giggling. Also, bless you and thank you for the plug! :)

Oh god I have a feeling things are gonna get difficult with the fans and old friends for Ava

Well. I definitely can see the break coming from such a tense situation. I understand Ava's feelings since a) she done did the deed with his best friend and b) she feels like shit. It's not easy to just go from feeling like crap to feeling like a million bucks, no matter how many times you're told that 'It's ok'. I like where this is going, so I'm hoping the next emotional roller coaster ride I go through will be a happy one :))