Some Moments Last Forever - Comments

This was amazing.Your writing style made me feel like I was in her head, dealing with all her feelings the same she was. Perfectly written. I honestly have no negative critiques. You have astounded me! Good Job!

This was amazing.Your writing style made me feel like I was in her head, dealing with all her feelings the same she was. Perfectly written. I honestly have no negative critiques. You have astounded me! Good Job!

@ aandrandom
Thanks for the comment! I appreciate it a lot, and I am glad it felt real to you. I definitely did a lot of research before writing it down.

I really liked this. It was horrible (because I recognize some of her feelings) but at the same time very beautifully written. I think we've all had a small feeling of what she felt in the story even though it may not be at that extent. What I really felt could reflect back to me was the feeling that you don't want to get out of bed, because it just ain't worth it and simple chores like taking out the trash suddenly feels like climbing a high mountain. When you feel bad mentally nothing else matters and you can't focus on anything else but the fact that you do feel bad. So I think you captured the feelings quite well even though you've never felt as bad as she did (which is good) :)