The Train - Comments

@ Shep

Thank you for the comment, darling.
It was originally meant to be a one-shot, but it has the potential of being a full story, so I might work on that.
No worries on the comment size, I'm just happy to have a comment on an original fiction.

There was something chilling about this.
The narrow, vivid imagery was part of that - I love the little details.
Is it a full story, or a one-shot? I'd love to see it evolve into a full story.

I'm also in love with the small, confined layout, the red and black and the banner all flows so wonderfully well.
And the simple title. Simple titles are my downfall, I'll read anything if it's titled so.
I'll have to read more of your things; this's really piqued my interest.

Apologies for the stubby comment: I'm writing and trying to work the kinks out of a layout.
-Apollo