Here from my free read blog : I have only read the first few chapters because this is actually quiet long. So far it is very interesting, I like your character development and they way your writing flows from chapter to chapter. Keep up the good work love!
I like where this is going! I think that you have some great chemistry between Rebekah and Daryl which makes it more realistic to me. I loved reading about their history and the summary drew me in. It was very short and to the point which made me very curious! I noticed that there are a few errors here and there, mostly some words are capitalized in the middle of sentences. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading this great piece of work!