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  • chickenorawesomeness

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    @ Mrs.becker
    Awesome, thank you.
    March 7th, 2014 at 05:52pm
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    @ chickenorawesomeness
    Thank you I've rewritten the second chapter several times it is difficult for me to write from her pov but the next will be up soon.
    March 7th, 2014 at 05:43pm
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    Good start so far. I like how you used his disorder in the first chapter. I also liked how you explained his background a little. Great character and story development! Great job!
    March 7th, 2014 at 05:31pm
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