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  • Defying Failure

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    Oh my gosh I can't wait to see what happens at the movie marathon. c;
    February 17th, 2014 at 07:19pm
  • Lyra

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    @ a beautiful lie;
    Next chapter should be up in the next couple of days, thanks for commenting!

    @ Harley91594
    Frank certainly could have handled it better, definitely. And if anyone can make Grace feel better, it's Gerard :)

    @ BeAZombieLikeMe
    Frank could have handled it better, but I don't think he was being mean necessarily.He would have felt awkward having sex while someone was waiting for him. Frank tried in his own way to confront Grace about what's going on, and he doesn't know how else to get her to open up so instead he avoiding the problem now. As for being worried about Gerard...well you have every reason to be worried. Gerard is a nice guy, but that doesn't mean he won't make his feelings known just because Grace has a boyfriend (if indeed he does want Grace) and Grace may not be able to handle it. Ah man, my inability to update frequently is just problematic at this stage. I have the time, and then I don't have motivation. I get motivation, then something happens and I have to stop writing. Its a vicious cycle. When I was working I was writing every couple of days for the most part, and now I have lots of free time I'm finding it impossible.
    As for Nick, I don't blame you...he's the character I hate the most out of all the characters I've created.
    February 5th, 2014 at 02:38pm
  • naaasaaaaaDELETEME

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    I have mixed feelings about how Frank treats her but then again I guess it is a realistic reaction after everything that's happened. I agree he could have been nicer about leaving though, especially with the 'state' he left Grace in. I kind of got nervous when Gerard asked her out, I mean I know he knows she had Frank but I can't help but worry that something might happen (not that I'm saying that's a bad thing I'm just worried as to how Grace would react to it). I honestly feel like Frank needs to man up a bit instead of avoiding Grace. Anyhoo, AMAZING chapter and I cna't wait to see what happens next!! I love your writing and don't worry, an update is better than no update at all! I know the feeling of wanting to get your writing back on track but life is a bitch ans just goes 'nope!' ugh I hate it, so don't worry I'm pretty sure we all understand how life can get in the way so don't stress out about it because we'll always be here!!!

    P.S. This may be a bit random but my hands are twitching to just grab a kitchen knife and cut off any and everything that makes Nick categorized as male. Sorry my mental is showing...

    Once again amazing chapter!! xxx
    February 2nd, 2014 at 09:34am
  • Harley91594

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    Wow Frank could have been nicer about leaving but hopefully G will make Grace feel better.
    February 1st, 2014 at 05:58am
  • a beautiful lie;

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    Oh my gosh this story is absolutely incredible. I can't wait for the next chapter :)
    January 31st, 2014 at 08:55pm
  • Lyra

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    @ pixiewayro
    Thank you hun x

    @ nailsntacks
    Thanks for commenting :)

    @ Vanilla Beatnik
    Oopps, thanks for pointing out the typo, will fix it asap. Thanks for subscribing and commenting, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
    January 22nd, 2014 at 07:05pm
  • Vanilla Beatnik

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    Subscribed! Really enjoying this story, refreshing to see depression and abuse being tackled realistically- also like the burgeoning love triangle developing bit by bit. Should point out that there's a typo- "dingy" is a kind of boat, "dingey" is badly lit. Can't wait for more! Xxx
    January 21st, 2014 at 04:02am
  • nailsntacks

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    Like always great writing. This is a very interesting story concept. Can't wait to see where it goes. Very Happy
    January 21st, 2014 at 12:41am
  • pixiewayro

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    I really feel for these characters... I love the way you really let us into their lives, you know? You paint a clear picture of their ouchies, and... Just... I just love it! <3
    January 20th, 2014 at 08:17pm
  • Apocalyptic

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    This story is amazing, you're a fantastic writer. I cannot wait to read more!
    December 9th, 2013 at 09:38pm
  • Harley91594

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    @ Lyra
    No problem, now I'm off to go read "give 'em hell, kid" :-)
    December 1st, 2013 at 07:10pm
  • Lyra

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    @ Harley91594

    *facepalm* Thank you for letting me know...I really need to be more aware of what I'm doing *shakes head*
    December 1st, 2013 at 06:53pm
  • Harley91594

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    I think the "Chapter Five" you just put up is for your other story, just so you know.
    December 1st, 2013 at 06:18pm
  • Harley91594

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    Well they let the cats out of the bag, that is progress.
    December 1st, 2013 at 06:06pm
  • Harley91594

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    I hope you enjoy seeing Jared!
    November 25th, 2013 at 06:42am
  • Harley91594

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    Oh my goodness Iove how you described Frank, I think I'm in love with him!
    November 21st, 2013 at 05:50am
  • Apocalyptic

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    I'm really loving your story <3 Keep writing!!
    November 20th, 2013 at 10:14am
  • Minding My Own...

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    Awwww.Frank is so understanding:) I hope she'll be able to tell frank when she's ready.update soon?
    November 19th, 2013 at 02:49am
  • Frozen December Moon

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    Love it, I don't think coffee would be too bad but her boyfriend might take it a different way.
    November 12th, 2013 at 09:23pm
  • Harley91594

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    I understand why she had to turn him down, but coffee sounds harmless. I hope they can be friends :)
    November 12th, 2013 at 04:34am