@ a beautiful lie; Next chapter should be up in the next couple of days, thanks for commenting!
@ Harley91594 Frank certainly could have handled it better, definitely. And if anyone can make Grace feel better, it's Gerard :)
@ BeAZombieLikeMe Frank could have handled it better, but I don't think he was being mean necessarily.He would have felt awkward having sex while someone was waiting for him. Frank tried in his own way to confront Grace about what's going on, and he doesn't know how else to get her to open up so instead he avoiding the problem now. As for being worried about Gerard...well you have every reason to be worried. Gerard is a nice guy, but that doesn't mean he won't make his feelings known just because Grace has a boyfriend (if indeed he does want Grace) and Grace may not be able to handle it. Ah man, my inability to update frequently is just problematic at this stage. I have the time, and then I don't have motivation. I get motivation, then something happens and I have to stop writing. Its a vicious cycle. When I was working I was writing every couple of days for the most part, and now I have lots of free time I'm finding it impossible. As for Nick, I don't blame you...he's the character I hate the most out of all the characters I've created.
I have mixed feelings about how Frank treats her but then again I guess it is a realistic reaction after everything that's happened. I agree he could have been nicer about leaving though, especially with the 'state' he left Grace in. I kind of got nervous when Gerard asked her out, I mean I know he knows she had Frank but I can't help but worry that something might happen (not that I'm saying that's a bad thing I'm just worried as to how Grace would react to it). I honestly feel like Frank needs to man up a bit instead of avoiding Grace. Anyhoo, AMAZING chapter and I cna't wait to see what happens next!! I love your writing and don't worry, an update is better than no update at all! I know the feeling of wanting to get your writing back on track but life is a bitch ans just goes 'nope!' ugh I hate it, so don't worry I'm pretty sure we all understand how life can get in the way so don't stress out about it because we'll always be here!!!
P.S. This may be a bit random but my hands are twitching to just grab a kitchen knife and cut off any and everything that makes Nick categorized as male. Sorry my mental is showing...
@ Vanilla Beatnik Oopps, thanks for pointing out the typo, will fix it asap. Thanks for subscribing and commenting, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Subscribed! Really enjoying this story, refreshing to see depression and abuse being tackled realistically- also like the burgeoning love triangle developing bit by bit. Should point out that there's a typo- "dingy" is a kind of boat, "dingey" is badly lit. Can't wait for more! Xxx
I really feel for these characters... I love the way you really let us into their lives, you know? You paint a clear picture of their ouchies, and... Just... I just love it! <3