This entry was great overall and made it easy to see the scene being set right in front of me. All the imagery and descriptions really set the scene well and allowed the audience to be there for the scene. When I first picked this picture, I imaged someone would probably do a couple that was really into paintball- the kind with guns- and I was actually pleased that you came up with your own idea of what the couple was doing to get so messy. I’m a real sucker for cliché romances and this couple seems to have one, so that immediately drew me in. Like I said this is a good entry overall; there were very few minor grammatical errors that I noticed, but nice job.
December 18th, 2013 at 10:03pm