Reckless - Comments

I do like that you started with a preface, setting up a point for the story to rest on. I absolutely loved this description: "And music became the only way I could silence everything and everyone around me and pretend I’m still the teenage wreck that breathes music and self-promises that looks are never going to be important, and I’m never hurting anyone as much as I’ve been hurt." It's so perfect. It reminded me of a musician I know who has been on the brink of success for a looooong time.

The realism of your characters and their situations is what draws me in the most. <3 I'm definitely subscribing to this.

There is something about this story that is just so intriguing. It starts off like it's going to be one of those innocent stories that's been read time and time again, and then you drop the gauntlet without any mercy. It's perfect. I seriously love the line "red carpet strut and party all night." It's almost like a point on a compass. And then with the second chapter, you throw us in a room with a live bomb that just goes off.

I find myself wanting to see where this goes, and for that I'm subscribing. And recommending this. I hope you update it soon.

I absolutely love the way this story starts out so innocent, with just the train and the scenery, and then we realize that this story has a character with some deep rooted emotional problems. You can tell from the way she describes her tattoo, the pain it causes her, and what it means regarding Jonas. You can see that this is going to be a story with a lot of character development and inner turmoil with the characters, and I find that those are the stories that get the deepest!

I'm really digging the present tense in this story, not to mention that I love the writing style. This story sounds really interesting and all the girl power that I'm assuming is going to at least be in it is something we all need, amirite. I'm also really into this layout. It's gorgeous! Great job on the story!

I have to truly say! This is amazing!!!

Hi, so I'm here from my comment swap. First, I love the idea for this story. I like that you have Reckless, a band just starting, and Madnight, the already slightly famous. I like that Georgia notices how much she's changed I love how everyone else notices how much Michael has changed except him. It's pretty well written, and it's very vivid. I can almost see Madnight arguing in my head.

This is so amazing! I love how you made the tattoos symbolic rather than just making them something that Georgia wanted. I like how this entire chapter is kind of a reflective time for Goergia because it shows what she's thinking and you can see what she's seeing. You write lovely descriptions by the way.

The red carpet strut and party all night.
^That is my favorite line of the whole chapter so far. It's just funny and witty too!

The only thing I suggest doing is capitalizing all of Wave my self goodbye since it's a song title.

Other than that, I enjoyed reading this fic and thanks for reccing it. :)

This feels like a breath of fresh air because I've never read anything like it.
I'm really excited to see where this goes!

Recommended and subscribed!

I'm unsure where you're going to go with this, but I'm very interested by the little taste of it you gave. I'm very impressed and I think the plot is something that's new and original. Good for you.

Delivering a free read from my blog :)
Wow!!
I loved this! The first chapter is so intriguing! I am definitely subbing! You have my interest piqued.

Wow.
I am suitably impressed.

I'm assuming that this is just the beginning of something else, and if so, it's a very promising beginning indeed. I was absolutely hooked from the beginning, and that didn't wane at any point. I'm so impressed that English is not even your first language! Your vocabulary is wonderful, and honestly I didn't notice any errors until about the final two paragraphs. I do hope that you don't keep your writing a secret for long, because you have a very obvious and deep natural talent for it.

I'm absolutely excited to see where this story goes, and I have subscribed. If you would ever like anyone to Beta your writing and fix up a couple of the tense or vocab issues then I would be more than happy to help- and if not, I'm also more than happy to sit back and enjoy this ride. I am so intrigued by her past, by where she's going - I feel like this whole story could be one long bus ride with no resolution, as long as I find out where she's already been. Please do keep writing this. I'm so glad you commented on my blog!

Also, thank you for introducing me to Rory Gallagher, this music is absolutely beautiful! I've just fallen in love with 'I Fall Apart'!