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  • banana sykes.

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    Addicted!! I love this story because its unpredictable and I have no clue what's going to come next!
    November 23rd, 2013 at 09:14pm
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Oh shit it's about to go Down war time
    November 23rd, 2013 at 09:14pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this story
    Please update soon
    Xxxxx
    November 15th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    Love this story
    Please update soon
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    November 15th, 2013 at 09:35pm
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Hahah well well look how just got caught
    November 15th, 2013 at 03:45am
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    Hahah well well look how just got caught
    November 15th, 2013 at 03:45am
  • spidermanforever

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    Freakin sweet! Love how Brian got out and that the guys have the upper hand :) can't wait for more XD
    November 15th, 2013 at 03:28am
  • spidermanforever

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    Totally awesome.. I wonder what's going to happen when the guys find out Brian got kidnaped..cant wait for more :)
    November 10th, 2013 at 10:39pm
  • Greenwolf7

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    I lovin this
    I want more and soon please
    What's naydia going to do with Brian xxxx
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:24pm
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Yeah baby I was right all along whoop whoop
    November 10th, 2013 at 06:49pm
  • grayson;

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    Omfg! She's a Russian spy. Haha. Anyways i love where this story is going. (: I want more!!
    November 6th, 2013 at 06:11am
  • banana sykes.

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    Wow, this is really good! It's progressed at a really good pace!!
    November 6th, 2013 at 04:55am
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Hahah yeah bitches I was right she's a spy whoop whoop
    November 5th, 2013 at 06:21am
  • wildone101

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    she is a fucking killer wait hold on she somthing i got to say ha lol luv it keep going
    November 5th, 2013 at 05:24am
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    She is a fucking spy
    October 30th, 2013 at 11:53pm
  • Moriarty;

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    First off, I love the font for the chapter titles- it's so gorgeous! And already I can't wait to read what's going on here, it's gorgeous.
    I really love how you've set it all up here, the character's voices are so well defined, I love it! There's a real lack of stories like that on here, but you've done an amazing job here! More soon!
    October 29th, 2013 at 07:23pm
  • Heaven_syn_gates

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    Wait a minute is she some type of spy or evil being or assinssn of something
    October 28th, 2013 at 02:48am
  • wildone101

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    "hope you like it" I LUV IT please update if can
    October 26th, 2013 at 05:14am
  • BlackMorphine

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    Why is all because of a woman?
    A good start!
    October 25th, 2013 at 11:40pm
  • Synful Cocktail

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    I really loved this! It was so original, and the descriptions? Spot on, I could imagine everything and clearly picture in my head what was going on. Oooh, I like Brian as a character already and the unknown confessional girl at the start.
    October 25th, 2013 at 03:27am
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