You're What? - Comments

arg they need to be ok after all this

;-;
I love this story so much. Ryan & the baby HAVE to be okay. They just have to. Q~Q

I'm just gonna load all my guns and pack my torture kit aND FIND THOSE FUCKING DICKFUCKS AND MURDER THEM!

;-; Poor Ryan... DAMMIT NASON I WILL TEAR YOU LIMB FROM LIMB

OH MY GOD ;-; LET RYAN BE OKAY Let TJ MOVE ON MY FEELS

JACKY C VINCENT WHAT THE FUCK. YOU DO NOT LEAVE YOUR CURRENT BOYFRIEND ALONE WHILE YOUR PSYCHO EX-BOYFRIEND IS TRYING TO GET BACK WITH YOU.

@ storm the ripper
I see what you mean but I am just going from a perspective that has had it before as it may not be deadly but sometimes it can be. Thanks for saying!

Just stating from a medical point of view,pneumonia isn't something that just happens.People usually contract it when they work too hard when their immune system is weak.And I've had it several times and it wasn't deadly at all

@ Becksy101
Find some other FIR stories with lots of reads and see how they work. My stories are not exactly a good example because I haven't updated either of them in almost a year but just look at your work and compare. What you've put in now needs to be a slow-ish process. You can skip every now and then but don't just time jump and throw in a lot of drama in the first few chapters. Message me and I'll explain a bit further c:.

@ team toka.
Ok thanks :) any ideas on how I could slow it down?

It's a good story, just a bit rushed. I like it and you should continue but it's rushed and that's what I don't like.

@ TheLastSnow
I hope you will enjoy what is going to come! Let's just say it will be an emotional roller coaster!

You must continue this! Now that Ryan's pregnant I'm excited to see what's in store

*le gasp* poor jacky he's left to die on the floor by tj :c
So far your story is awesome! :D

Poor Jacky:( But still poor Ryan.. Make him better!

JACKY BABY WAIT NO I'M SORRY I LOVE YOU WE LOVE YOU NO I CAN'T BREATHE PROPERLY HelP

This story is giving me so many feels at the moment that I can't function correctly and I am slowly fading away. But Ryan's making progress! But TJ needs to burn in the darkest pits of Hell. But Ryan is arising! But Jacky.

This is great. <3333

o: poor Jacky! At least Ryan's trying to wake up...

OH MY FRICKING GOD.

ARE YOU KIDDING ME.

DAMMIT.

i am breaking. help.

(ryan needs to arise and be okay and jacky needs to get outta tj's shit and mate with ryan ok ok.)

I really like this so far, I haven't seen much of this pairing being written before. :)

@ Becksy101

Yeah ....Ryan is a total sweetheart <3 He was the only one that I really got to talk for more then 5 seconds ( it was like a minute maybe XD) .....and all due to the shirt that I was wearing ......funny (yet a little weird) story with that