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You should do "Her" point of view. Show how she's feeling as she hears this conversation.
-Hope this helps!

November 9th, 2013 at 10:51pm
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ahh i must read more! i hope to see more of it!

November 3rd, 2013 at 04:51pm
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this is cute and, bittersweet, and..i hope you continue with it!:)

October 29th, 2013 at 12:17pm
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I really like this!

October 27th, 2013 at 07:02pm

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