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  • brookemckenzie09

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    You should do "Her" point of view. Show how she's feeling as she hears this conversation.
    -Hope this helps!
    November 9th, 2013 at 10:51pm
  • brookemckenzie09

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    ahh i must read more! i hope to see more of it!
    November 3rd, 2013 at 04:51pm
  • elleirarenlle

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    this is cute and, bittersweet, and..i hope you continue with it!:)
    October 29th, 2013 at 12:17pm
  • raja sahara

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    I really like this!
    October 27th, 2013 at 07:02pm
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