Girls, Breaking Hearts - Comments

Ohhhh! Give me that talk between Bailey and John. I can't wait! Anyway, they are so adorable, aren't they?
Yes, update more!

AH! I love this so much! I think I have a good idea of what's going to happen...

Oh, Halvo, you silly boy! But I love all of them. I wish I had friends like these.
I hope you will write a lot chapters; babies ^^, etc. Yup? Yup.
Keep writing!

(I'm glad you didn't listen to my previous comment about "taking some time apart") they are back together ❤️ I love that you're always updating. This chapter was so cute! And 500 miles is a great song, I imagine him singing exaggeratedly to her haha

They're so perfect and right for each other...ah, my babies ♥. So good to have them back together! :)

"It always felt like that in John’s arms." Oh god, I bet it always feels right in his arms. Uh-hh.
Anyway, omigod! That was cutie-cutie-cute. It's ok, I mean, that she forgave him so easily (what about make-up sex ^^).
You're damn great. You make me want to write more and more, but I'm not that great and ughfgh.
I can't wait for more, keep writing <3

You are like the best updater ever... I look forward to coming on here and seeing if you've updated this awesome story everyday. Keep up the good work you're amazing :) Love this <3

First of all, that picture of John is just...just...I can't, AND HE'S WEARING THE FUCKING MARILYN MANSON T-SHIRT I LOVE ON HIM SO MUCH♥. Okay, I'm gonna behave like a 22 year old kid from now on.
So much has happened in those two chapters and I love it! You sure you're not friends with O'Callaghan's friends though? Because every and each of them and just their talks and stuff...it just was so real, you know?
I really, really hope Brooke and John will be okay, but he definitely needs to sort his shit out.
Can't wait for more! :) ohh and I can't wait to see Shane's reaction when he finds out what's been going on behind his back!

Good thing both of them gold their friends. I think a short period of time will be good for them to think about what they have and to clear up some doubts. and I'm happy with the overall reaction of both of their friends. I think age is a factor in a relationship, but it's not determinant, state of mind is more important.

Oh, I love that photo of him! <3 And yup, good that he told his friends too. I can't wait for more and more and more, update soon! I do hope so they will be fine.

I am so in love with this story... you are amazing gurrl :)

Good that she finally told them. Everyone needs friends and advices. I hope they will be fine <3

Well that fight was bad; I wonder if they'll make up, like what will John do to ask for her forgiveness? He needs to fucking grovel that's for sure!!

You go girl! I mean, she's right to act this way, ofc. But I don't want them to break up. Jeez. Well, I hope something cute will happen. C'mon, John, she's worth it.

I thought she might have forgotten her phone, but I got carried away by John's paranoia. Wow, hello?! what?! cheat?! why we always jump to the worst possibilities? Brooke is right to act this way, when he's on tour for months with a lot of girls trying to get next to him is really easy to have trusting issues, but she can't be away for some hours and he already think that?! He has the right to be worried, but he overreacted. So he deserves the cold shoulder until he is really sorry. I have a feeling that someone else will find out their relationship

-_- I am mad now, but this is an excellent story! Jeez. I definitely wasn't expecting that!!!

loooooooooooooooove

Loved this chapter!!!! I just want to know where Brooke is!!! Update soon!

Loved this chapter!!!! I just want to know where Brooke is!!! Update soon!

Jesus...Christ....wheeeew. Now that was something and let's just say that drunk John has a special place in my heart. Their conversation, their closeness, their...everything is just so perfect. I feel like I know them like they're not just some fictional characters, but real people (well, John obviously is, but you know what I mean). And that kiss in a car... I definitely approve. You should sneak in a couple more innocent kisses here and there . Just saaaaying...

But...where's Brooke? Now I have too many thoughts clouding my mind I can't think straight! I'm pretty much having a panic attack right now.

I seriously love you for updating so soon! ♥