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  • keigo takami.

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    Love, love, love, love~ Milo just sounds like such an adorable character. I honestly can't wait to see the chemistry between him and Andy since Andy always seems cool and laid back.

    I definitely love the idea and the plot for this. There have always been summertime fics, but never really lifeguard related fics and shit. I even like the fact that Milo literally doesn't know how to swim but he only goes to the pool to see his crush. Literally?? That is so me, like what?? And when he asks his mom if they can go to the pool but he's already dressed, I feel that on a personal level. Milo is definitely an interesting character.

    I love the description of Andy. I feel like it's not the narrator describing him in their own perspective, but rather, something Milo would describe them as in the moment and the narrator is just quoting them. Just for that brief moment when Milo sees Andy.

    Please update, I need to know what happens between Andy and Milo now that after years of always seeing him around, they finally have an actual interaction.
    July 15th, 2018 at 05:18am
  • YOUxMEx5

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    ^~^
    February 2nd, 2014 at 10:22pm
  • limewire virus

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    @ YOUxMEx5
    Awesome! :D
    February 2nd, 2014 at 10:20pm
  • YOUxMEx5

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    You're welcome :)
    And hell yea! I'd love to :D
    February 2nd, 2014 at 10:07pm
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    @ YOUxMEx5
    Thank you! :)

    Hey, wanna write a story? :D Haha
    February 2nd, 2014 at 10:01pm
  • YOUxMEx5

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    I love it :D I like your writing style
    If you ever wanna collab with me you know where I am lol
    February 2nd, 2014 at 05:21am
  • ghjkghkj

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    I can see a lot coming from this story. I've noticed your stories are insanely diverse and well written. You have a lot of potential in this story and writing in genreral. I subscribed which I don't normally do with OMC stories but this one fascinates me incredibly. Well written and grabs my attention in the first sentence.
    November 10th, 2013 at 07:34pm
  • castawayy;

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    I like it. A lot. Milo needs to get out of his shell a little. I can imagine Milo drowning and Andy giving him CPR but that's just me. You're the writer and you could be totally different. Lovelovelove it!
    October 27th, 2013 at 06:58pm
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    I like it. A lot. Milo needs to get out of his shell a little. I can imagine Milo drowning and Andy giving him CPR but that's just me. You're the writer and you could be totally different. Lovelovelove it!
    October 27th, 2013 at 06:58pm
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