Smile This Out - Comments

  • First of all: "Still with the freckles in my eyes doing backflips, I held my breath again and tried not to cry. I pulled my knees up to my chest and felt it tighten again from a lack of oxygen, the tears coming anyway. There I was, fucking up in front of someone who cared – classic me." -- Awesome paragraph.

    Secondly, I think you did a great job capturing the awkward way friendships start. I mean, there are those that start with sharing a sandwich in kindergarten, and then there's these mismatched encounters that happen in high school that form bonds stronger than any pres
    chool PB and J. Excellent one shot, I'm really glad I found the review of it and took the time to click!
    December 28th, 2013 at 07:30am