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  • jason todd.

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    Everything you write gives me this weird happy/sad feeling because I just know something's going to go wrong and I don't know what it will be.
    November 17th, 2013 at 01:17am
  • loveupsidedown

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    This is great! Your first one was great too! I didn't even know you deleted it until I just found this one... Keep going. I love it! It's so cute and just lovely.
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:26am
  • loveupsidedown

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    This is great! Your first one was great too! I didn't even know you deleted it until I just found this one... Keep going. I love it! It's so cute and just lovely.
    November 3rd, 2013 at 01:26am
  • open water.

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    These seems really cute! (: I missed your first version - but this seems like a really good start. I really like how you ended the first chapter too, "...called it Love." So cute! In Love She seems so innocent and it's such a cutesy-fluffy intro.

    ( now I don't want anything bad to happen to them ever ;_; )

    Can't wait to see what happens next anyway though ! (:
    October 31st, 2013 at 05:14am
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