i loved the last chapter as usual and i really liked that the past few chapters patrick hasnt really been in it as it has given the focus back to Jitters and you are able to see how she has changed. i also love the friendship between jitters and alex as i think its probably has more of a connection then her with jack as that friendship is more about having fun but i think her and alex understand each other better and its nice that she s making new friends. Can't wait for the next update
@ charmbaby12 AAAHHH thank you! It always feels so awesome for people to pick up on things like Jitters maturing without me having to explicitly say it ! It makes me feel like I'm doing a better job of showing rather than explaining
the last chapter was really good as i felt it showed jitters development quiet well this was shown when she told alex the story behind her nickname as i feel that earlier in the story she would have told him to fuck off, i cant wait for the next chapter and hopefully soon the wedding plans start making an appearance
@ Jalex95 Hahaha I started considering it when I wrote that chapter hit you're right I'll probably keep the big wedding. I got a couple curve balls before the wedding though
@ bobobo I love the friendship between jack and jitters as on the surface they appear the complete opposite as jack is very outgoing and seems to makes friends with everybody and jitters is very private and is very selective with who she lets in but I do love the relationship as I do find that they have some similarities in their personalities and I hope that they continue their friendship
Oh my god I thought jitters was serious about running away to elope lol I was screaming at my phone for Patrick to say no! They need to have the most perfect wedding imaginable!!
@ charmbaby12 I was planning on giving them a big wedding but now I'm rethinking it! I'm glad you like how I added ATL! I feel like I'm not really doing them justice so I'm gonna try harder! What do you think about Jitters and Jack?
I loved that last chapter and I very sorry for not commenting I thought I had so I must have dreamt it or something . Any way back to the present I nearly died when jitters suggested getting married but I am torn between wanting them to elope and having a big wedding but I am sure you will make the right move and I love the relationship with atl
@ alyiscool I'm so glad that Jack's character has enough depth for you to worry about him and Jitters! I've reread your comment so many times it makes me so excited! I plan on keeping him around- unlike other random names I've dropped lol- so I really hope you can give me a minute in the future chapters to let me know what you think still! It really kicks my butt into gear to update sooner.
@ Jalex95 Thank you!! I'm so glad when fandoms cross over but it's a little stressful when no one like...lets me know haha. I can never tell if I'm doing a good job of staying true to celebrities' real life personalities but I'm so so happy you like it! For some reason adding Jack made me a little nervous. Thanks for giving it a shot I hope you stick with me!