Three Left Standing - Comments

@ A. J.
i totally get it. but seriously, thank you. even though it's a bittersweet story

When someone's writing grabs me, I let them know with a comment and a rec. (or with a subsc. if it's a chaptered story) I'm happy to be sad- if that makes sense. lmao!

@ A. J.
Don't worry about rambling. I get it. I sort of wanted to be cryptic because it doesn't matter who it is, just that the person loved Cobra. I don't mean to make you sad, but again, I did because it was part of the reality of it. Thank you for the comment and recommendation (again).

Another magnificent work of art. I have to admit it's a little cryptic regarding who is standing there at the end, but really, all that mattered is that this person LOVED Cobra. The beginning is heartbreaking to read. It puts one in a cloud of despair reading that no one cares about the person buried there, and are in fact, put out about about being there to begin with. Then the haunting words “...deserved what he got,” come and I wanted to stop b/c I knew this was going to be emotional, but I couldn't stop because your writing puts me RIGHT. THERE. Again, my relief came at the end when that male speaks. It's a sad story, but maybe in Rest, Cobra can find peace? Sorry for rambling all over the place =)