His Car Crash Heart - Comments

I so wanna see where this goes! Like, what'll happen when she finds out Pete knows Patrick?? Things have moved pretty fast between them, but I like that you've given them something they can really identify on--they've both got real, tangible mental issues. Update please xo

Just read the first chapter. I knew immediately what you were referencing. Such an ace idea to elaborate on that girl!

@ sodapop curtis
I'm extremely flattered, as a fan of yours, that you liked this chapter so much. Things are about to unfold in this story, and most of them will not be pretty. So far it's following Grey, but this is a long story, and it has a lot of things that you guys probably will adore, such as the release of Infinity on High. You'll see, you'll see.

Dude, that was so not shitty. At all. I think this is my favorite chapter so far, it's filled with such raw emotion that I felt an ache in my chest just reading it. You write beautifully, honestly.

I just wanted to let you know that I'm re-reading Gray and I just got to the part where Pete is in the psychiatrist's office and he sees the redhead girl in the pink sweater come out and in my head I screamed "SHIT THAT'S ARIA" Hahaha so now I can't wait to see how else you're going to incorporate the events from Gray in this.

I love Pete and Aria's relationship so far and the fact that they have a bond over each others' illnesses. Oh and all the Gray parallels You're such a talented author!

Update soon!!

I read this when you first posted it but didn't have time to comment but I hope you explain her back story soon because I'm a little confused, haha. But I guess that's what keeps me reading! I want her and Pete to be in love so bad and I want them to be the key to each others' happinessss.

Can't wait for more!

I read this when you first posted it but didn't have time to comment but I hope you explain her back story soon because I'm a little confused, haha. But I guess that's what keeps me reading! I want her and Pete to be in love so bad and I want them to be the key to each others' happinessss.

Can't wait for more!

"...To be honest I don't give a damn about you"
"Me neither."
I fucking love this part I don't even know why. I feel like it's going to define their whole relationship. Idek. Update soon!

Eek I love this so far! I love that you're going to use Gray as a reference point for the story, too. One of the first fics I ever wrote was something along these lines, even though I never posted it. Great minds think alike I suppose! In any case I'm excited for more!

Update?!