Don't Matter - Comments

I’m not very familiar with this fandom, but I found myself being sucked into the story. I don’t know what it is, but there is something about the way you write that sucks people in. I really wish this wasn’t just a one-shot though. I feel like it could have great potential as a chapter-fic. Your layout was really easy to read, and the song choice for your title/end was a great choice (I mean, you really can’t go wrong with Fall Out Boy in my opinion). I forgot to mention I was sent here from comment swap. Please, continue to write because you’re really good at it!

@ conordane;
hey chicky, unfortunately this is only going to be a Oneshot.. But I do have another story involving the handsome Daryl Dixon ;) but thank you for your comment, I'm smitten - Yasmin x

I'm not familiar with this fandom, and when you started saying that you saw people running towards the house and stuff with no background information about them I found myself getting a little confused. But then again as this is a one shot I presume that you didn't want to go into too much detail so I won't bang on at you too much. I like you're writing style, it's simple and clean cut, you get straight to the point and have a good way with words. I especially liked the first paragraph and even the first line. The detail of saying 'red striped tea towel' instead of just 'towel' like most people would have shows that you have an eye for detail and that made this much more enjoyable to read. I really liked t so well done! Oh and I forgot to mention that I am here from Comment Swap.

Omfg! I'm super excited to read more of this story. I love it so far and I'm a HUGE fan Daryl Dixon. (: