Contest Entry #4: Yup. Had me hooked from the Once Bitten, Twice Shy story. Once again, I like how they're still struggling for a chance at their relationship and Jenny is struggling to accept that James is a vampire. I also liked the small things you added to it, like her referencing Twilight. Ah, the irony. I also like how you commented on how it's not a fairy tale, and that life is still unwritten. It's deep in a way that Jenny still needs to come to terms with what she is feeling as opposed to how she always pictured her life to be like. Very powerful. I really like this series you have going.
Yup. Had me hooked from the Once Bitten, Twice Shy story. Once again, I like how they're still struggling for a chance at their relationship and Jenny is struggling to accept that James is a vampire. I also liked the small things you added to it, like her referencing Twilight. Ah, the irony. I also like how you commented on how it's not a fairy tale, and that life is still unwritten. It's deep in a way that Jenny still needs to come to terms with what she is feeling as opposed to how she always pictured her life to be like. Very powerful. I really like this series you have going.