October 30th, 2013 at 11:56pm
the quote in the summary which was "They say the soul of a highwayman never rests." caught my attention. Kudos for that.
I like the simple banner and layout. If fits the type of story this is.
As for the first chapter,
I like Ezra's personality and his unique name, I can't wait to see how he will develop as a character.
This seems very interesting even though this is only the first chapter. I don't find this rusty, not at all. It's pretty for being the first chapter.
If there was ever a time he had wished his soul had moved on, it was then.
This was a very nice was to end it. I adore it.
Keep up the great work! Bookmarked.
~Marian.
Anyway I'm going to sub and rec because this is a really great story so far!
I kind of like how the italics doesn't fit in with the rest of the chapter. It adds a mystery to it which make sit more intriguing. The chapter is very short, but beautiful. You said what needed to be said while still adding a hint of mystery to it. This seems like a very interesting story and I'm interested to see where this goes and how Ezra develops :)