January 4th, 2014 at 07:46pm
But It's Not Really Him - Comments
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THE PLOT THICKENS!!! I think that Mikey's POV was necessary! If I had simply read Gerard's POV, my heart would be fluttering beyond belief but now I realize it may be too good to be true... eee! I loved the update! More when you can, please <3November 9th, 2013 at 10:07am
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Holy crap nice twistNovember 8th, 2013 at 10:51pm
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I really want him to be the real frank but i dont think i can trust him, speacialy because if it were me i would make him a clone and just make everyone cry
I must say the chapter is very captivating and that i can not wait for more!!!!!!November 8th, 2013 at 10:08pm -
I don't know whether to hopes it's the real frank then a fake one turns up or vice versa
November 8th, 2013 at 05:10pm -
...that ending!!!!!!!!!! D:
That is one hell of a cliffhanger, I LOVED THIS UPDATENovember 6th, 2013 at 09:07pm -
im soo excited about this story :)November 5th, 2013 at 08:00am
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He's alive!!! LolNovember 5th, 2013 at 12:09am
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@ TYLER.F.T.W.W.W
Thanks! I'm really happy you like it.November 4th, 2013 at 11:49pm -
@ Mimi's Stories
Thanks that means a lot as I don't feel I have much of a talent for writing. Comments like this really motivate me to write more :) so as a thank you I will desperately try to update in the next couple of days!November 4th, 2013 at 11:48pm -
The chapter was depressing in the most magical way, i must say you are a wonderfull writer
Update soon pleaseNovember 4th, 2013 at 11:42pm -
The chapter was depressing in the most magical way, i must say you are a wonderfull writer
Update soon pleaseNovember 4th, 2013 at 11:42pm -
Dude, these chapters tugged on my heart strings. You're an impressive writer, I must admit. ^.^like this fic a lot. Update soonNovember 4th, 2013 at 10:56pm
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perfNovember 3rd, 2013 at 03:40pm
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perfNovember 3rd, 2013 at 03:40pm
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You haver to writte more of This.
I santa to know hoje fun ghoul comes back and how party poison reacts!!!!!!November 2nd, 2013 at 03:28pm -
OH MY, OH MY, OH MY!!! That was such a perfect and powerful first chapter!!!! I am utterly intrigued, this is so wonderful. Please, more when you can please!! <3November 1st, 2013 at 08:44pm
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omg I'm just crying Q.Q I felt Gee's pain and sadness in my chest and my go. You're amazing! I love it, seriously it's just a perfect begining. I want update! *-* Gimme more of it pls :33November 1st, 2013 at 12:20pm
I'm really enjoying the story but I believe you should drag this story out because I see potential and it kind of (not a lot) kills it for me because it gets to the situation without the suspence. If we had a little bit more background on how Gerard kind of coped within those two years the story would be a hella lot interesting :).
But I still love what you have here!
If you also need a beta I wouldn't mind helping you out!