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  • miser

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    Intriguing. One small thing -- the last line here makes it seem like Terra is coerced to comply, rather than of her own accord. But that's just me. Unless if that is your plan.
    Good work, though. I like the uniformity of it all.
    November 9th, 2013 at 11:04am
  • archivist

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    I'm only halfway through but I had to stop and comment because omG WHAT IS THIS
    The summary was captivating. I love it so much.
    And the layout is absolutely perfect. The banner, the small font, just can't.
    In love. Rec and sub. ♥
    November 3rd, 2013 at 07:18am
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