Good description! Your are good at hooking the readers into the story. Your layout was cool too, how do you get that font? I really like it. I also like how this story flows, you are really good at writing what it feels like to be someone with a sleeping disorder who has anxiety and is depressed. You can really emphasize with the character, keep it up!
WOW. You had me hooked on the summary page so that's pretty impressive. As morbid as this sounds I love reading stories like this because it lets you see the raw emotions people get even if this is fiction. People can relate to this so that's what makes it so awesome. It's also a little different that it's boy going through this all rather than a girl. I was thoroughly impressed with this and with comment swap giving me this story. You're a fantastic writer and I hope you keep it up.