I'm New to This - Comments

This is soooooooo good so far, but I was really disappointed to find that there was only two chapters so far... I hope you update this soon!

I can't say much on the story itself--I usually don't read slash, but this is honestly cute. Valik sounds like such a cutie pie and so shy too! Also he sounds hella cute. Black hair and blue-ish green eyes? Definitely a great combination! Honestly any slash affecionado would love this! It doesn't start off too harshly, and it left me on a spot that is just right.

I honestly hope you keep this going! Also are you fluent in Italian? I could pick out some words though I'm Spanish, Italian and Spanish are almost the same. You could use a little more details but overall this little chapter is just as great.

Also I love Italian accents.