RAGZ - Comments

Well, thank you big time xx

Like ive said before, its honestly my pleasure i just hope i helped haha xx

Well, see if you look up the movie Rags. You will find him, the handsome amazing singer that he is xx

Not really, to be honest i dont even know who he is haha your story just seemed a good plot haha xx

Hey Sam, thank you so much for your reply it means alot. I understand what you are talking about. Can I ask, are you a Max Schneider fan?

Becca xxx

Your welcome and another tip would be that when you do add your speech marks give each one their own paragraph if that makes sense. O it would be like: georgia rushed down the stairs and into the kitchen, her body collided with another.
"Oh I'm so sorry dad"

"Its okay sweetheart"

Bad example i know but still you get it?? Thats just a thought as it breaks the text up and allows easy reading for the reader. Keep writing the story is great though :) btw I'm just passing on advice i got given when i was writing haha might as well share it :) -Sam xxx

I actually really appreciate you telling me this actually because I have done this in one of my other stories and no one has commented on it to tell me this, thank you very much Sam

Becca x

This seems like a really good story and I'm sure you have a great plot line however there is an issue with your punctuation. I don't want you too see this in a horrid way it is just a mer suggestion. Maybe when writing speech you should use speech marks? It would help to clarify when some thing is said. I hope this helps -Sam x