The Coming of Justice - Comments

Haha, I decided that I'm going to wait till I finish the story before attempting (& failing) to make a layout due to how the first one looked (like a grey twinkie).
You've been slacking on me. Haha, I'm only kidding. :P
You probably enjoyed the short smut involving Kaitlyn haha! :P
Hah! Surprisingly, I was going to keep him alive till the end of the story and fight by Bret's side but knowing his aggression, it got out of hand and sudden reaction meant his demise.
Yeah it would be pretty nice if they did come out with new material. lol, he should come back to music since it's great material the band put out. I never really got a chance to hear their third album, only 02's.
Now that I think of it, that sounds better than what happened in the story, lol.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Haha, I don't blame you there.
Sorry for my delay in reading, & responding, just haven't been on here since my last update. I really loved the last two chapters. It's interesting imaging all these people working together, & for what reasons they are. I'm sure you enjoy eliminating Cena, haha. :P
Haha, Deadsy was such a good band, I really wish they'd do something new. Elijah was supposed to have his own solo thing going on years ago, & then I never heard anything more from it. Last I heard he was doing art or some crap. I'm like "No, come back to music" lol. Elijah has a very interesting voice.
Welcome. That would have been an interesting twist for sure. :)

@ AestheticStar
God I hope not because I don't want to spend hours having to go back & forth just to see how it looks lol
Maybe newbies to the site might pick up on them & dig the reads. Deadsy has been coming on a lot on LastFm for me lately lol
Thanks. :) I should have had it be someone else or just totally fuck Bryan over by having Punk showing his true identity as being in cahoots with Hall & Nash. I'm definitely sure people would find it odd that Cena wasn't the one killed.
Heck yeah it was. I'm going to be working on the fourth part today & hopefully have it up by the end of the night or tomorrow.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Haha, well hopefully it won't turn out squished next time. :P
haha, yeah it is a lot. And not all of them are that great, so I'd probably pick & choose which ones I like the most. Some of them have people like Elijah Blue, Carlton Bost, Jay Gordon.. people that most don't know about or probably care to read about. I went on a major spree of writing Elijah/Carlton when I was obsessing over Deadsy lol.
The update was really good! Shame Punk died, but hey, I can't speak too much on that since I killed him in Summertime Suicide lmao. But that was back when I didn't like him. xD Very interesting twist with the nWo.

@ AestheticStar
Hahaha! :P I'll probably do the same & get frustrated if the next layout turns out with another squished story, lol
Whoa, that's a lot but put them up, you never know unless you put them up. If they want to know, they can just ask. :P
I'm typing out the next chapter, it starts out slow though but starts to gain wheels. lol
I hope you do like it. :)

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Hahha! Yes I totally cheated. :P But eventually I'll probably fuss around & make new layouts, if I ever start posting new stories again. Granted I ever start writing again lmao. I know I've got like 80+ ones finished & just around, but most of them deal with people that I'm sure no one reads about, lmao much less know who the hell they are. :P
Can't wait! I'm sure I'll like it. :) Haha, true you can always add more to that stuff later.

@ AestheticStar
They probably have changed things. Cheater! :P It's all good though lol
Next chapter is going to be pretty good I think. You'll like it I think. More content, different faces, a touch of smut but not really graphic; that kind of stuff I can always write later. :P

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Yeah sometimes it can be really tricky doing the layouts. They probably changed a lot since I've made my layouts, 'cause I had some saved from other stories, so I just cheated & used one of the same layouts I used for another story lmao.
Sounds like a good idea. Can't wait to read the next chapter. :)

@ AestheticStar
I thought it had switched back to the default but I guess there was something I missed. I deleted the layout & will start a different one after I put up the third chapter.
I was thinking that it would be easier than editing the ol myspace profile but I guess not, haha
I'm going to check out the other stuff you got on here as well.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
I see what you mean about it smashing everything together, 'cause yeah I can't even see the story now. That's really weird, 'cause I've never seen anything like that happen. Hopefully it'll get sorted out. They've probably changed stuff in the layouts since I've done all of mine, 'cause I made a few layouts a long while back when I first started posting on here, & posted old stories.

@ AestheticStar
Yeah, after I finished it & applied it, I was wondering what happened to the story but it had smashed it all together making that thick black & grey line.
Gmail didn't alert me about these updates til after 4am when I pulled the plug on XL.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Welcome. :)
You're welcome. Yeah it can be a little confusing at first, & take a little messing around with to get the layout right. It confused me at first too I think haha.

@ AestheticStar
Thank you! :) I added a bit more to the hospital parts to sort of make them more dramatic. I intend to have the third one up by Sunday afternoon.
Thanks, I found it. :)
I made a sample one but it didn't turn out right lol Looks like a thick gray & black line, I'll tinker with it more later.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Chapter 2 didn't disappoint. Good work!
For the layouts, if you go to My Mibba, hover over the "stories" link, & it gives you "layouts" in the drop down menu. Click that, & you can click "create layout". Hope that helps. :)

@ AestheticStar
Alright cool! I hope this story will deliver since it s the first being available pubicly. I'm hoping to have the second chapter up before going to bed tonight. I have some poems in mind that I want to put up as well.
Both. I looked in the forums but got so confused.

@ VoiceOfTheSoul
Welcome. :) I'll be looking forward to it. I'll sub to it, so I get alerts.
Don't know how to get to the layout creation? Or just don't know what to do for the layout?

@ AestheticStar
Thanks! There's going to be plenty more in store to dig as I'm pretty sure that the second chapter will be up by Tuesday night & quite possibly a new chapter every couple of days.
I want to add a layout to it but have no clue where to even begin one.

Digging it so far!