Here to judge the Walk A Mile In Someone Else's Shoes Contest!
The layout is a tad bit busy for my taste, I'm not rather fond of pictures in the background, but it was readable and neat so points for that.
My favorite thing about this was that you built Ahena's outfit and her personality around her shoes. I sort of pictured this odd, quiet, quirky girl and that's exactly how you portrayed her. And I'm a total and complete sucker for Spencer Reid, but I like that this could be read without knowing anything about Criminal Minds. I didn't have to rely on previous information to understand Spencer and his personality. You brought him to life! This was like a little snapshot into the beginning of their relationship and it was cute and simple. And I appreciated that you cited where you got your facts from.
I didn't notice any big errors in grammar/spelling except for the run on paragraphs. No spaces in between dialogue made it a bit difficult to read.
This was short, sweet and to the point, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!
The layout is a tad bit busy for my taste, I'm not rather fond of pictures in the background, but it was readable and neat so points for that.
My favorite thing about this was that you built Ahena's outfit and her personality around her shoes. I sort of pictured this odd, quiet, quirky girl and that's exactly how you portrayed her. And I'm a total and complete sucker for Spencer Reid, but I like that this could be read without knowing anything about Criminal Minds. I didn't have to rely on previous information to understand Spencer and his personality. You brought him to life! This was like a little snapshot into the beginning of their relationship and it was cute and simple. And I appreciated that you cited where you got your facts from.
I didn't notice any big errors in grammar/spelling except for the run on paragraphs. No spaces in between dialogue made it a bit difficult to read.
This was short, sweet and to the point, and I really enjoyed it. Thanks for entering!