Ignite - Comments

I've never read a story like this before I don't really know what to say because the other two commentors have said it all, this piece is amazing!

I've always loved short stories like this one. To be able to create a whole story in a few short sentences is simply amazing. I've tried it before, and it was difficult for me, but, I mean, that is different depending on the person. I was curious as to how the story was going to be after reading the word that was given to you and the theme of the story itself. You did a fantastic job at bringing both the object and the theme together into a story.

I really loved the last line of the story. To me, it was like the perfect ending to the characters story even though I know nothing about the mysterious characters. By just reading this, it makes me want to create the characters in my mind and how their relationship is since none of that is mentioned in the story. It's always fun when the reader has the chance to imagine what is happening in the story or adding details that weren't specifically mentioned in the story. Okay, now I'm ranting. You did a fantastic job on this story; I love it!

Thank you for entering my contest! I was really pleased with your entry.

I wanted to commend you on your title and your layout. I thought that your layout was really, really, nicely done. As for your title, I wanted to say that I loved it. I thought fire, and how fire is associated to love, so that was really great. You also used the title in the story so that was just awesome. I think your ability to achieve perfect balance was commendable. I thought that you packed just enough punch and had enough balance in your words to make the story really pop.

While I enjoyed the theme representation, and how you really gave personality a face, without making it a person, was great. I just wish it could have been slightly more weaved throughout.

Your piece was amazing. Great job!