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  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ pixiewayro
    Yes we shall...;)
    December 12th, 2013 at 05:02am
  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ Im2Human4Nature
    Thank you! We really enjoy this so I'm happy to hear you are liking it!
    December 12th, 2013 at 05:01am
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    @ Venomous Kiss
    You're welcome! :D
    December 12th, 2013 at 01:52am
  • pixiewayro

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    @ lizzicleromance
    No, thank you so much!!!! We really appreciate it, because we want to keep you guys happy!!!! <3

    @ Im2Human4Nature
    Thank you soooo much! We're glad you like it!!!! We hope to keep you entertained with this one... =p

    @ Venomous Kiss
    We'll talk, love! ;)
    December 11th, 2013 at 10:07am
  • Im2Human4Nature

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    This is awesome and funny can't wait for more
    December 11th, 2013 at 08:13am
  • lizzicleromance

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    I'm glad you didn't take offense to it!! That was my only con crit, which means other than the POV changes I don't think you need to change a single thing. I really am excited for more!! :))
    December 10th, 2013 at 11:27pm
  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ lizzicleromance As pixie said yes we now see all the pov changes are a bit difficult to understand so that will be sorted! Im happy that you like it so far and thank you for reading and commenting! *-*
    December 10th, 2013 at 10:48pm
  • pixiewayro

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    @ lizzicleromance
    Ah, thanks! Glad you like it so far! =)

    Yeah, about the POV thing... I've been thinking about it too, and, yeah, I don't like it like that... But, hey, it was a little test drive, and now it was confirmed that it's not the way to go... So, yay! =p

    My lovely co-author and I will sort our things out, though... It's our first time working together, so...

    Anyway, thanks so much for reading and for your input!!!! Xoxo
    December 10th, 2013 at 10:25pm
  • lizzicleromance

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    Okay! So, first, I love this. I think the characters are developing really well, I adore the storyline, I liked the interactions with Frank and his dad, and Frank and Ashley. Loved it, really.

    My only criticism- and I promise this is constructive! Is maybe not do so many POV changes? I totally get like, one or two changes, but... I mean, a paragraph would happen, and the POV would change really quickly. It got a little confusing and harder to read... but other than that, it's great so far!! YAY!!
    December 10th, 2013 at 10:12pm
  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ TearsOfGoodbye
    Me too! Glad you liked it!
    Thank you for reading and commenting!
    December 10th, 2013 at 08:24pm
  • TearsOfGoodbye

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    I loved it! I can't wait for Gerard to prove that Frank is gay. :3
    December 10th, 2013 at 06:06pm
  • pixiewayro

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    *sighs* if only we weren't so busy... =(
    November 11th, 2013 at 12:55pm
  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ blazebox247
    Thank you we hope to have it up as soon as possible!(^_^)
    November 11th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • blazebox247

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    omg this is great! can't wait for the next chapter!
    November 10th, 2013 at 09:50pm
  • pixiewayro

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    @ Lyra
    Thank you so much! =)
    Hope we won't disappoint...
    Xoxo
    November 10th, 2013 at 08:15am
  • Venomous Kiss

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    @ Lyra
    We can't wait to introduce him. Thank you for reading and commenting! ^_^
    November 9th, 2013 at 11:31pm
  • Lyra

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    So far so good. I look forward to reading more :) I'm can't wait to meet Gerard :D
    November 9th, 2013 at 08:26pm