Till Deceived Do We Part - Comments

Hm. I could've sweared on my grandma's head than I commented on this story before. Oh, well. *shrugs*

Anyways, I LOVED the update!!! I wonder what Jake'll do? And how will Flint react? And what's gonna happen to her? Will he call her? OMG! I can't wait for the update!!! I'll be counting the days!! ^^

~nyaa....

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
great amazing fabtastic job!!!!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D
haha i hope she saves Zane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UPDATE SUPER SUPER SUPER SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
they cant be sent away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
D: D: D: D: D: D: D:
AHHHHHHH!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB THOUGH!!
but i think drake will do something and save zane! :)
:D :D :D :D :D
i hope so....
UPDATE SOON!!!!!

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!1!!!!
im soooooooo happy!
HES ALIVE!!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
yay!!
UPDATE SOON!

HAHA!!!!!
man did i enjoy this chapter!! :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
FANTASTIC JOB!!!
i think they shudve found out something about Zane though.. oh well.
i do hope he is still alive.
UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!

Wow, chapter two is even better. Drake reminds me of Kate Beckinsale's character in Underworld. I cannot remember her name and I'm a HUGE Underworld fan. Just having a bit of a brainless morning. Yup, so really fantastic chapter again. You write the action very well.

Oh, I meant

A fantastic first chapter here. Really sets up the story perfectly. I love your observations of charachter. There were a couple of very minor grammar mistakes, but seriously nothing that matters. Great start; I look forward to reading lots more. ::claps: ::claps: ::claps:

HAHA!!!!!
FANTASTIC JOB!!! :D
Thanx for writing it!! :)
♥ ya!!
UPDATE SOON!!!

WOOOOOOOOO!!!!
GREAT chapter!!
cant wait for the meeting!!
ateast thats wat im guessing it is
:D
i hope she gets his trust back :)
well,.......
UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
nice chapter i LOVE it! :)
haha woo i like it how causing boris pain makes her happY!!!
update soon!! :D

Lolol I loved chapter 13.
The bit at the end made me laugh and smile like an idiot.

"You shouldn't see him etc -insert all serious chatter here- but with that out of the way... Drake & Dane sitting in a tree"

Pmsfl. I love your writing, you are very talented.

I love this.

WOOO!!!!!
i LOVED this chapter!
FANTASTIC job!! :)
OMG cant wait for the next chapter
and just so u no
u posted it twice on accident :)

OH MY FREAKING GOD!!!!!!!!!!
please please please please please update as soon as you get this message!!!!!!!!!!!! i will die!!!!!!!! :crazy:

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
GREAT CHAPTER!!
i loved it
keep writing please :)

OMG!! i absolutley LOVE this story!!!!!
great job plz plz plz put out a new chapter!!
i CANT wait!!!!!!!!!!!
GREAT JOB!!!

Damn, I love this story!
Amazing writing style, details everywhere, complex plot! What more can one ask for!?
Oh yeah: MORE UPDATES!

I hate your guts PurityOfTheBlood for ending the story like that!! I can't believe you ended the story like that! You always did that! Ever since grade 9! Grrrrrr....hahaha but other wise I love it! Expesially that police part! Love ya

*releases breath in great WHOOSH*

I totally love it! The POV is great, Drake seems cool and Jake sounds like a total sex pistol!

Your descriptions are swell and I lurve the plot line-

I'mma subscribe, so you update!

Pwease.